Monday, May 4, 2009

Unmasked


unmasked
unmasked it seems to be
it flew across my face my hopes, my dreams
men behind me they stare surprised
they can't believe whats before their eyes
the lady, she seems, stares in awe
acting as if she broke the law
amazed, it seems, that it was her
but before all of this it was all a blur
i cover myself in the background, achieving what she never did
she tried to acquire the win but we, we forbid
she wanted to fulfill her destiny
but it was us she didn't see
unmasked, discovered, apparent, bare
this must all be a nightmare
the dreaded unprefected tasked
only because i was simply unmasked

3 comments:

  1. This is a really good poem, your rhyming skills added to the overall greatness of the poem =)

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  2. That is a really good poem!! I love the picture, it is perfect for your concept:)

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  3. A very interesting picture and a very cool poem! Good job!

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